Great Job Maddy! I liked how you had a mini Ice-Berg. You presented it very clearly and you spoke loudly. Next time you don't need to read all the words that are on the Power-Point because we can see them.
Awesome PI Maddy!! You had a qood presentation and you spoke loud and clear. It was qood that you had a mini example of an iceberq. Very interestinq too. Next time: dont read out whats on the slide and look at the audience a little bit more. Awesome PI Madz!!! Britt =D
I found your PI really fascinating. Your research was good and you selected the information you wanted to present well because it was ALL very interesting. As I said to you, I think we will all remember the image of the iceberg in the salt water for a very long time. My suggestion for improvement is to not read the words on your slides, but to have pictures or diagrams just to support what you are telling us. Thank you for a VERY interesting investigation, Maddy.
great pi Maddy you had a interesting info what a great topic but next time maybe plan out your script and what your going to say. I liked your humor in your pi. you had a very clear voice and very. Your ice bergs was very cool and you seemed to know a lot about ice bergs and we never knew that there was so much information about ice bergs,Soph,Sara,Egg,Corbin!!!!!!!
Cool P.I Maddy. You have a really good knowledge of icebergs. You spoke loud and clearly and presented your P.I well. BUT... next time try cue cards or something a little smaller than the paper which you were reading off because sometimes you lost eye contact. Good job Maddy!
Well done! maddy that was so awesome maybe next time you could not read off the power point just have pics on the power point.bu well done!!!!=)
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freezing pi maddy! good presintation and spoke clearly! have your knowledge next time!
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shivering pi maddy we thought that you spoke clearly but next time have some more knowledge!!!!:)B)
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Maddy! I liked how you had a mini Ice-Berg. You presented it very clearly and you spoke loudly. Next time you don't need to read all the words that are on the Power-Point because we can see them.
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ReplyDeleteAwesome PI Maddy!!
ReplyDeleteYou had a qood presentation and you spoke loud and clear.
It was qood that you had a mini example of an iceberq. Very interestinq too.
Next time: dont read out whats on the slide and look at the audience a little bit more.
Awesome PI Madz!!!
Britt =D
good PI Maddy well should I say freezing PI ha ha
ReplyDeleteyou very clear and you did a experience .
next time maybe ...
put more a bit information next time
put other than that it was good
I found your PI really fascinating. Your research was good and you selected the information you wanted to present well because it was ALL very interesting. As I said to you, I think we will all remember the image of the iceberg in the salt water for a very long time. My suggestion for improvement is to not read the words on your slides, but to have pictures or diagrams just to support what you are telling us. Thank you for a VERY interesting investigation, Maddy.
ReplyDeletethat was cool going outside to see the ice made it lots cooler the only thing you need to do is speak a little slower
ReplyDeleteWell done Maddy!!! :)
ReplyDeletewhat you did well- you spoke clearly.
what you could do better next time- maybe make it more easier for me to understand.
great pi Maddy you had a interesting info what a great topic but next time maybe plan out your script and what your going to say. I liked your humor in your pi. you had a very clear voice and very. Your ice bergs was very cool and you seemed to know a lot about ice bergs and we never knew that there was so much information about ice bergs,Soph,Sara,Egg,Corbin!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCool P.I Maddy. You have a really good knowledge of icebergs. You spoke loud and clearly and presented your P.I well. BUT... next time try cue cards or something a little smaller than the paper which you were reading off because sometimes you lost eye contact. Good job Maddy!
ReplyDeleteawesome pi it was interesting about the icebergs
ReplyDeletebut next time don't stand in front of the power point.
cool pi maddy! you needed to know your info. you spoke clearly though!
ReplyDeletegood pi it was very intersting and i liked it when you showed us a ice berg but maybe next time you could put a tiny bit more info in it
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