I did well at adding a lot more adjectives, nouns, verbs, etc.
I learnt that just by adding a few little bits you can make your work a whole lot better.
Next time I will do better at making it interesting the first time.
I learnt that if you have one colour and then have a few little bright colours it makes it look really affective.
I did well at colouring all the same way.
Next time I will try not to have as much white.
I think did really great getting only three words wrong. Even though I only got one word wrong last time!