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Great PI Maddyit sounds like you had a blazst on your hoilday and i am looking ford to her the rest of your hoilday but next time mabey talk a bit londer but a parted from that well done.Lucy and Zia
Well done Maddy! That was a very Interesting PI but it was a bit long, Even though it was great. You spoke clearly and loudly.
well doe Maddy what you did well- you spoke clearly and you had alot of pictures.what you need to work on- make the pictures a bit bigger.what we learnt- That you can do a lot in 47 days
cool PI Maddy it was very interesting and paddingtion was cool and one day I hope I find a lepracon
WOW that was like the awesomest P.I ever! You spoke very clearly and set out your board very nicely! It was an awesome P.I and we think you are an expert. Next time have a little more pictures!Kate and Libby
Natalya and Linda- you spoke very clearly and you improve on making it shorter but other than that it was awsome
you did good we liked the pictures i wish i got to have one of those cocolate sundays they sounded yummy well done maddy.hadley caleb
What an adventure you and your family have had! You spoke VERY clearly and had good expression in your voice. Your enjoyment of your trip came through strongly. My suggestion for improvement would be to summarise and be a bit more selective with the parts that you shared eg the part about the toilets was clearly EXTREMELY fascinating to everyone!
That was a very interesting PI maddy. you really got us interesting.we enjoyed learning about your tour around europe.Next time you could make your PI shorter but still explain about all the places you have been to but just not use so much detail in every place you have been to.nat and kelly
Great pi maddy you had lots of pictures and information.and we also like that you did itt on some thing enteresting you could have put interaction in though
great adventures pi Maddy it was really interesting but you could a bit shorter.
Awesome PI Maddy, Sounded like Paddington had heapz of fun on his trip to Europe.You took lots of pictures, of every place where you went - with paddington in all of them of course!Your Title is bold and you used bright colors.Maybe you could of made paddingtons name a little bigger but i know that you didnt have enough room.Awesome PI Maddy!!
PS I forgot to say: you spoke loud and clear and you gave us yummy marshmallows! Britt =)
You spoke very clearly and explained everything well and you had a lot to talk about and you kept us entertained for ages so good job on your PI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well done maddsta! very interesting pi. next time you could tell us about spain if you went thier.
really cool Maddy love the marshmallows and me and harry like your P.I.
great pi maddy we liked the pictures next time maybe you should have it a bit shorter it was funny when you told us adout the poo part and we cant wait untill we see the pics of the colloseumhadley and caleb